Hola Louise,
Estoy muy agradecido para su apoyo y información en el campo de psicología. Es muy conveniente para tu experiencia en el campo y he aprendido mucho por tu. Psicología es muy interesante para mi porque me gusta a aprender sobre las mentes de humanas porque es muy complejo y no tenemos un explicación para muchas cosas sobre el. También, me gusta a aprender sobre eventos significas afectan las personas que experiencia. Es un campo muy complicado pero es muy importante para el mundo a entender y apoyan personas que necesito. Cuando trabajaba con tu yo aprendo que un psicólogo necesito mucha paciencia y necesito a entender personas con problemas anormal. Es una carrera muy emocionante y quiero darte gracias para tu tiempo y información.
Tu Amigo,
Kristina
Name: Kristina
Date: 10/12/07
Assignment: Informal Writing 2
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.no
I try to make my writing interesting.yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.yes
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.no
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.yes
I check my spelling.yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:using words im not familiar with
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:put more order into my sentences
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2 comments:
Student Writer:
Kristina
Student Reviewer:
Colin
Assignment:
Informal Writing #2
Date:
17 Oct 2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
4
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
You wrote about something you liked.
Student Writer:
Kristina
Student Reviewer:
Roger
Assignment:
Informal Writing #2
Date:
12/17/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
4
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
4
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
You conveyed the idea of the writing very well to the reader.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
When is this interview taking place?
Some suggestions for next time:
None.
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